i can never wait!

i just finished another rough cut of the videos i've been working on for ICN. i'm still working on the first in a series of about ten, which tells me that i highly underestimated the scope of this project. nevertheless, i'm learning a ton as i go and will continue to push through to the end.

so, this newest rough cut has some real roughness to it: the voice-over's crap (i did it myself on my headset mic) and the subtitles are still being sussed out, but here's what i've got so far.

let me know what you think. is the story clear? are more or less subtitles necessary? whatever. i know the audio's really bad, but i just can never wait to post this stuff once i get to anything remotely resembling a finished product.